मेरे पास शब्द नहीं है कुछ जताने को,
तुम मेरे कौन हो ये तुम्हें समझाने को |
जिसे मैं खुली आँखों से देखती हुँ,
वो हसीन खबाव हो तुम |
या जिसका जबाव मैं सपनों मे भी धूधंती हुँ,
वो जटिल सवाल हो तुम |
मेरी हर दुआँ , मेरा हर ‘काश ‘ हो तुम |
तुमसे ही दुरियाँ सब, फिर भी आस-पास हो तुम |
कभी मेरे अपनो से भी ज्यादा अपने,
तो कभी बिलकुल अजनबी हो तुम |
कभी मेरा सबकुछ तो कभी कुछ भी नहीं हो तुम |
एक पल को मेरी आँखों का इंतिजार हो तुम,
तो दूजे ही पल इंकार हो तुम |
जिसे पा के मैं अपनो से दूर हो जाउँ मेरी वो हार हो तुम,
या जिसे भूल के मैं खुद को हीं खो दूँ मेरा वो प्यार हो तुम |
मेरे ख़ुदा की रहमत की निशानी हो तुम,
या फिर मेरी अधूरी कहानी हो तुम |
या फिर मेरी अधूरी कहानी हो तुम |
बहुत खूब 👌😍
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Thankyou Rohit😊
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You’re welcome Lavanya 😊
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Khoobsoorat Rachna!!!
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Thankyou so much😊
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Welcome!!!
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Muje ye interrogation Ka silsila bahut accha laga Lavanya 😍😍☺
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Haha😛 Thankyou so much Sumit
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Maza aagay. 🙂
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BEHATARIN 😀
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Thankyou Manish😊
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Nice one !
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Thanks Vivek😊
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“कभी मेरे अपनो से भी ज्यादा अपने,
तो कभी बिलकुल अजनबी हो तुम |”
…विचारों की कशमकश को लिखने का अच्छा प्रयास…👍
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Thankyou Amit 🙂
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Very nice…
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THANKS Divyang 🙂
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बेहतरीन
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जिसे पा के मैं अपनो से दूर हो जाउँ मेरी वो हार हो तुम,
या जिसे भूल के मैं खुद को हीं खो दूँ मेरा वो प्यार हो तुम |
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कहने को सभी लाइन्स अच्छे है लेकिन ये कुछ ज्यादा
जिसे पा के मैं अपनो से दूर हो जाउँ मेरी वो हार हो तुम,
या जिसे भूल के मैं खुद को हीं खो दूँ मेरा वो प्यार हो तुम |
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Thankyou so much Dear… itne gaur se padhne or har lines ki gehrayiaan smjhne k liye 🙂
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Kya khub likha h behatreen lavanya 😊😊
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Thankyou Ajay 😊
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Hey,
I have nominated you in liebster award.
Check out my latest post.
waiting for your response and answers.
Thank You
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Oh God!!!😊 An award…Waao. Never thought that i could ever get nominated for an award…well thankyou so much Praneet.😊 I’ll give yours answers and write back soon.
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Welcome Miss Lavanya. It’s my pleasure to do so. Keep on writing and yes I’m waiting for your answers.👍💓😃
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To be honest I may not be inspiring
but it takes someone special to inspire me many a times it’s you and your writings
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That’s the biggest compliment I have ever got Ajay. I believe if your writing has the power to leave an imprint on the reader’s mind then only you are a good writer. So, your words literally made my day. Thank you so much. 😊
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Your most welcome god bless you
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Hey are u on Instagram?
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Currently I am inactive on every social media, but yeah I am there by the name ‘lavanyaria’
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Kya baat hai….maza aa gaya Lavanya-G.
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Shukriya Shukriya 😊
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वाह जितना भी तारीफ करूँ आपके लेखनशैली का वह कम है।।।उम्दा लेखन👌👌👌
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya 😊
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Cute shayari
😎
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Beautifully put ❤️
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Superb👍👍👍
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Daya jara pata lagao…. Akhir isko likhne ka inspiration ata kha se hai 😛😜
Bht khoob Likhti hai ye balika
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Hahaha😂😂
Shukriya Shukriya
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Lovely 👌👌
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Thanks 😇💞
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Welcome ji
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Reblogged this on The Shubham Stories.
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Very nice 👌👌
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Waking up to these sweet comments really made my day Shubham..
thanks😇
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OMG…its my pleasure if my comments made ur day 😊😊😊
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यार पता नही क्यु… लेकीन ये बार बार पढने का मन करता है..great one 🙏
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Thanks😇😇😇 acha lga ki aapko pasand aaya😊💞💞
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thanks to you for post a beautiful and lovely poem
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Loved it!! Specially these lines…
“या जिसका जबाव मैं सपनों मे भी धूधंती हुँ,
वो जटिल सवाल हो तुम |” touched me deeply!!
Hope you get whatever you wish for ☺️
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Hey.. thankyou so much for ur lovely words…💞🤗😇
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सुन्दर प्रस्तुति …
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शुक्रिया 🙏☺️
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